Wednesday, July 10, 2013

Burger and Fries (JKT) - published by NWW Feb 2022


Fat Budi the turd put one over in the fare out to Irwan’s kampung in South Jakarta. Three hundred thousand initially quoted; half-hearted challenge led to fifty reduction.

Two hour ride. Traffic. Benzene alone would cost him Rp100k, fat Budi the fuck lied. (The return cab totalled Rp75k.)

A few days before during an exploration of old Batavia near the port the prick had the damage from an accident he was responsible for voluntarily paid. (Two hundred thousand Rupiah split with another passenger—$AU25. Chinese Madame in a Toyota with Indo driver.)

An hour saw us arrived at Jagakarsa, outer south of the city. Trafficless toll-way. Narrow pot-holed streets. Hundreds upon hundreds of darting motor-cycles, riders angling up on the wrong side of the road.

Low-rise ramshackle buildings, screened stalls at that early hour. The one sight was the 7am Bogor train with the newscast image of passengers up on the roof under the cabling.

The Jagakarsa kampung was a kampung in name now only, an administrative relic. Irwan’s father had bought the house a number of years before from the proceeds of a modest motor spares business. Four or five room dwelling on 300sqm. With earnings from a few years on the international cruise ships and in partnership with an auditor brother, Irwan had bought two small neighbouring shops on the main drag, where a small cell-phone business was established. The auditor lived in Bandung; two other siblings with children in the house with Irwan and their parents. All smooth sailing until Irwan was widowed during his wife’s delivery.

Small traders along the road; the mosque where Irwan and family worshipped new and well-presented; a vegetable market. A short distance away a plantation of trees was difficult to identify initially. One looked for coconuts, despite the fact these were not the common type. Finally, the memory of the pisang at Mersing in Malaysia a year previous. (Bananas were out of season.)

Close by the market a roof on an impressive double storey house bore some kind of mounting high on the ridge. Clearly not a garuda—the mythic eagle-like totem in Java. Closer inspection showed an enlarged black and white crowing cock, a beauty.

We drank heavily sweetened teh in the sitting room that lacked a television (the box sat in the adjoining room). Delicious home-baked chocolate cake was served. Irwan had been implored, No feast please, no special reception. A short visit—a first in a Muslim home—merely to consolidate the friendship and visit a Javanese kampung. (One had vainly hoped for rice paddies, even in present-day Jakarta..)

Half through the visit a chap turned up on a motor-cycle needing to talk to Irwan. Some matter requiring attention. Irwan excused himself for five minutes. Enough time for the brief exploration—banana plantation, crowing cock, &etc. Unexpectedly at a news-stand a current edition of the Jak Post, not easy to find even in Tanah Abang.

Strolling in the shade casually, on the opposite side of the road there was Irwan’s mother, was it? Yes, footing back toward the house.

Helloes across the traffic. Hello. Hello. A couple of small white paper bags waved aloft.

Yes, yes. A little turn around the neighbourhood, back soon. Circling in the air with a finger.

The woman had no English and the Bahasa Malay learnt in Singapore was dicey in Java.

At home Irwan was waiting. Conversation resumed.

How to explain a writer’s life? Man traveling solo without family of any kind. No sign of the wealth like the cruise ship passengers that were Irwan’s index.

Feverish work Irwin; little dollaro you can believe what I say, my man.

Halting communication that was interrupted by the mother’s entry with another plate, carrying two small paper bags.

Please. Please.

Ah. But…

Hamburger and fries, Irwan announced.

Hamburger? And fries?…

Oh. Well. Thank you.

The mother had been picked in a trice, the very first moment. The way she angled her head, hunched her shoulders somehow and sought you out with reaching eyes. That outward flow like a river in flood was known. There was a definite type in any kampung the world over.









Flip-flops (published by NWW)

incorporated later into a longer sequence titled, Land of Brothers, published by New World Writing, Feb22



A little cantina like from the Westerns, Mom and Pop affair near the bridge over the river on Jalan Tubun. Squid, 4–5 veg., pisang for dessert—not fried, natural in its skin—totalled Rp24k, perhaps for foreigners in panamas. Nevertheless, Rp5k cheaper than the average mall latte.

Pop had fallen from his mount chasing bad guys in a posse. Almost not a single word of English between the friendly, homely pair. Hello. Thank you.

Yesterday on departure Pop had got out something he recalled from Hollywood movies. Pop was softer; it was Mom’s eyes lighting up at the register.

— I love you! for his favourite new regular.

— Ah! You’re the best Pop.

A couple days earlier at a late lunch Pop had received two pals in the room behind—unrendered, unlit, couple of laundry tubs for wash-up. One could tell how far back the pals went as soon as they rocked up on their motor-cycles, Pop limping out to greet. On re-entry to settle the bill—bench out front gave a ringside seat for the captivating carnival of the street—the threesome were found on the floor of the second room, cardboard laid to soften the seating. That kind of cantina.

The event of that Sunday morning took place at the first lane along from the hotel drive, not fifty metres distant. Mom & Pop were on the other side of the bridge.

At the head of the lane one of the young traffic wardens directing bikes coming onto Tubun noticed a lad footing up the rise. Couple of quick words while the man waved three or four bikes safely through. The fellow tall, soiled white tee, knee-length shorts and baby-blue flip-flops. Usual wear in the heel and the balls of the feet.

How were the inner soles of the foot-wear spied so particularly? Well, therein lay the tale.

The pal coming up was shorter, tubby (where the other was the usual rake-thin). Darker tee and shorter length shorts; minus cap.

The traffic warden was equipped with head-cover.

Past midday; two days of rain previously. Now sun with a vengeance.

Ideally you would want head-cover, on point duty especially. Home-boy lacked both top and bottom— man was barefoot.

Unlike the children, not many of the adults on Tubun went barefoot. Not noticed immediately here. The fact of the matter was revealed only subsequently when the traffic warden called loudly after his man.

The tone told. Possibly the warden rose to his toes calling.

The chap hailed may have half-turned; only briefly going up Tubun in the gutter with the flow of the traffic. Wasn’t for stopping; clearly a march lay ahead.

What the warden had called was clarified by his action a moment later.

In his hailing the man had kicked out his feet in front of him, releasing the flip-flops. One foot, then the second, flipping the footwear before him. (Thereby partial wear revealed.)

Although the other may have half-turned and heard what his friend shouted, he did not see the corroborating action; the generous offer displayed. This was seen by others; possibly more than one on that busy street that was always a hive of activity.

One got such care and consideration, such brotherliness, in slums, true communities.


  1. The self-appointed traffic wardens were common both in Malaysia and Indonesia. In the case of Jakarta and its notorious traffic the lads provided an indispensable service. One young Blade at his crossing on Tubun paced the bitumen like a lord of the jungle, in turquoise tee and white flat-cap, former emblazoned: WHAT THE FUCKUNBREAKABLE. Usually a twenty slipped the lads by appreciative drivers. Recently that particular bottle-neck in Jakarta had been relieved after the clearing of the street stalls by the new Governor, now President, Joko Wiwodo.

Monday, July 8, 2013

Idolatry (Jakartan Slum) NWW

This piece was included in a longer work published by NWW, Feb 2022, titled Land of Brothers



Over a dozen times Omar has visited Jakarta. On each of these earlier occasions it had been the high-end of the city, the new, modern Jakarta that had been explored. When Omar traveled with his wife it had been particularly the case. A two hundred dollar hotel room had been taken on at least one recent occasion in the last twelve months, at the Millennium, a five star hotel on one of the busy thoroughfares.

Most Singaporean visitors to Jakarta followed the same course, exchanging their commercial hub for the equivalent in Jakarta. In Jakarta of course there were bargain prices The annual Jakarta Great Sale scheduled during the long school holidays was on at the time of this particular trip. 

We had lunch at Millennium on the second or third afternoon, the cost for two the equivalent of our room charge at the two star Kalisma Hotel a short distance away.

Rather unexpectedly, shortly after dinner on the first night, Omar had wanted to enter the slum quarter, on the inner fringe of which stood Kalisma. On previous occasions Omar had not ventured there; this time he had a willing companion. There was a kind of vague pretext that the venture was for the benefit of the foreigner, in order to show him Third World living and hardship, when in fact Omar plunged into the matter like a man who had left important unfinished business wait too long.

In childhood, after the family left the mosque where the learned Arabic grandfather had been provided quarters, Omar spent his formative years in not dissimilar conditions in the kampung that had stood in present-day Geylang Serai—pretty much on the spot where a mock-up Malay Kampung was constructed when Lee Kwan Yue was taking the new republic on its own fateful Great Leap Forward. Clean, ordered, bland "pigeon-hole" living had been Omar's fate subsequently, like for most Singaporeans of his generation.

Jalan Tubun on which Kalisma was located had been preparation for what lay beyond the main road. Some housing was retained on Tubun, usually of the better, more spacious kind behind high ornate fencing on larger allotments. Largely though this was a commercial strip that included timber yards, a church, two or three mosques, a hospital and cemetery.

The traffic in Jakarta was infamous of course, this particular area of Tanah Abang the worst in the city because of the large textile market. Volume of passage brought opportunity and drew all manner of hawkers, pedlars and fossickers to Tubun. At the make-shift stalls along the stretch from the river were old tools and appliances, shoes, clothing, a couple of rough shelters either side where painted women awaited customers, tyre and motor-cycle repairers. From their perch on the narrow road divider directly outside Kalisma a couple of men sold drivers face-towels. The traffic and heat oppressed equally in Jakarta. On Tubun the chaos of cars, bikes and scooters would be much worse without the young, self-appointed traffic wardens boldly stepping into the middle of the road and orchestrating with illuminated batons and shrill whistles.

The poverty on Tubun was in the ragged carters, the more ragged solitary homeless with their bundles, the barefoot children trooping along in the gutter against the traffic hurtling past inches away; above all in the bedraggled elderly, especially when they were found alone and seemingly abandoned. The elderly were either abandoned or else insisted on paying their way in their families with their own scrounging on the street. Tubun was unsettling, and more so what lay close behind it.

Omar’s move was abrupt and made without notice.

A wider, darkened lane initially lined with small rickety traders of various sorts where motor-bikes and adapted passenger scooters needed careful passage. Here the stalls that were still trading were mostly fixed rather than mobile, the business all local and not the passing of a busy dual motor-way. Many of stalls seemed to have given up the ghost, left behind by Tubun’s attractions. A number continued to trade small items—cigarettes, cold drinks, soap and sachets of coffee and shampoo. Small ramshackle food stalls survived, hairdressing booths and small trades. There was a tooth-puller without the pretensions of dentistry such as one had on Tubun.

The darker, less frenetic and cheaper back quarter that radiated off Tubun lowered the rhythms to relaxed domestic level. In mid-evening's sporadic street light the display of people and dwellings showed uncomfortably naked to an outsider—a White and a business-shirted Arab.

In the narrow passage we soon entered two and one half or three metres separated the walls of dwellings either side. All the encounters here were touching distance.

One tried not to peer too closely. The day before Omar returned to Singapore he counselled that care be taken not to stare too hard, nor poke one's nose too far in explorations of those quarters.

There was nothing shocking or disturbing. Long-tailed rats were well-established; a small monkey that was sighted a few days later startled only momentarily. Chaffing and unkemptness, ragged and soiled clothing, general dishevelment in a domestic, communal setting did not seem like the blight it appeared on Jalan Tubun.

Hopelessness and desperation were not apparent. The cramped living quarters needed adjustment. The housing was all make-shift, weathered and grimed; jerry-built it used to be called in Australian. Most of the core building at least was sound enough; it was the lop-sided annexes and porches that produced the tumble-down effect.

Rusted tin, battens tied with rattan in lieu of nails—straightened old nails were sold on Tubun—plastic sheeting usually for screening the street and keeping out the sun. The warungs, the little roadside food stalls on Tubun, all used the same sheeting against the noise and dirt of the traffic.

Squares and levels had not been available for these half-pie builders—such implements came too late onto the general market (they sold currently on Tubun). Having fled the real estate bubble back home, all its consumerist values, none of this was very shocking. Omar had spent early years in such dwellings, and indeed the author too. Father’s old fibro bungalow built out the back of the block before the brick veneer was slowly erected was not dissimilar. Like Omar, a dozen years older, we too had a night-soil man, dark-skinned in fact quite like the people of this region.

There was much refuse, plastic and paper wrapping; if there was any food scraps it was cleared by the chooks. As on Tubun, Parfumeries surprised here, the product usually in aluminium cylinders and decanted into flasks women brought from home; seeing them, the absence of odour became apparent.

There was a filthy water channel. One could not call it a creek or stream. The water stood stagnant, littered from one bank to the other. Presumably the rains when they came temporarily cleared the garbage.

Large areas of Jakarta had been under water only two months earlier; the city famously sat below sea level. From the first President Soekarno's time there had been projects to remove the capital to another site, presumably with its current ten million inhabitants.

The dwellings turned their backs on the water, muddy rear access providing a garbage chute. The sight of the water may have been what prompted Omar to an exploration at that place. It was to be the first Jalan Tikus, Rat Alley, explored in the region.

Small, seemingly stunted figures, men, women and children, the elderly among them, sat indoors and out; others sprawled sleeping or resting, as often in Singapore, in the most unusual, grotesque postures. A few televisions churned the darkness with their colour. Back on the thoroughfare later a short distance off we came upon a police station, or community building adjoining the station, where a mounted TV facing the street had collected a dozen men leaning against cars and lamp-posts for a football telecast.

Make-shift narrow ladders led to make-shift mezzanines. There was no radio or music, even the TV's were muted; or perhaps the visual blanketed the aural completely.

Appropriately, there was no soundtrack to the passage through the slum. 

The narrow path followed the decline of the channel. Children were at play. There was no begging from them or anyone else until the end. When it came the begging seemed to arrive as an afterthought.

Desperation or despair was not apparent in Rat Alley. There must have been an unconscious expectation and readying for it. It failed to appear anywhere on that first acquaintance, or any subsequent.

Greetings and smiles were offered and returned when extended here. We had perhaps managed our exploration in a fitting enough manner, without too much intrusiveness. The absence of stricken looks of horror and shock may have helped.

Here and there through the streets men and women, elderly usually, sat on the dirty, broken pavement staring vacantly. One chap recently was caught in that attitude seemingly fixated on the base of the plastic barrel that stood between his legs.

The prohibition against alcohol could not be under-estimated. It was sold here and there from the plank shelving on Tubun and consumed somewhere out of sight. Within the alley-ways there was no sign, and none of its effects, neither public drunkenness nor the gaiety.

In Rat Alley and all the other alleys there was no sinking of spirits apparent. Against expectation, first time visitors to slum areas were commonly struck by that more than anything else: the smooth orderly living in settled rhythm. On the contrary, rather than anything down-hearted, there was ease and relaxation, laughter and playfulness on the first night within the alleys, and on every subsequent visit.

A foreigner offering the courtesy of even the most meagre greeting and enquiry in the native language always smoothed a passage. For someone who grew up in an alien cultural setting the matter was clearly understood. Here weather-beaten dark faces showed their inner light all along the row shared with the rats. Pity was misplaced there; in fact it was one’s own  resilience and courage that came into question in that place.

The lasting memory within the row on the first evening was of the children's play.

Likely the narrow lane took numerous twists and turns ahead beyond the Maypole where we turned back again. As an introduction we had ventured far enough. Jakarta sprawled over a large area, all the old housing low-level. The two main vectors had been discovered almost immediately running parallel to each other beside Hotel Kalisma—the river and rail-line. Gambir, the main city station built by the Dutch for the link to the port, stood a short distance away. Rat Alley was by no means the most precarious living in this city; the rail-line was lined with much more flimsy shelter for new arrivals, where goats and sheep were kept in the adjacent yard.

The ages of children in particular here was easily underestimated. The little band here could not have been much beyond the six or seven year cohort.

In this case the leader of the group seemed to be at the lower end, a little dark lovely in green dress. Beside the tall iron pole where the group congregated six or seven others squatted in a tight bunch. The presence of an outsider failed to distract. In more than a fortnight in Tanah Abang, no other White had been sighted beyond the Mall precinct. No-where in the vicinity of Hotel Kalisma one kilometre off; certainly no-where along the narrow lanes and alleys in-between.

None of the children in the group at the pole gave the Bule, the White any attention. Only one brief glance was raised by the leader in the green.

The girl marshalled attention in the circle with the spell she was brewing.

Nothing struck more deeply that first night in Jakarta than seeing the familiar children’s game that captured the little group away from the adults. This was far more striking than rats, monkeys or anything else. 

Over twenty-five months in the communities on the equator the extensive kinship of traditions and customs had been proved many times over. Still, to come upon in a Jakartan slum immediately adjacent the new shopping malls and the promised future this particular game from a playground of fifty years before seemed remarkable. 

There was great competition among kite-flying young boys here who gathered evening on the grass in front of the local hospital. Pigeon racing was popular among the next age group. One came across infants blowing on little coloured windmills; on children adapting cardboard boxes for play. There was no lack of energy or imagination in the rat-infested slums.

The tall free-standing iron pole clearly had been chosen and claimed. Children from distant playgrounds fifty years before had adopted the same kind of magical centres for their base of operation. These poles, stalks and trees stretching upward never ended within sight.

Each child here had extended a foot into an inner circle they had created. Plastic sandals of a variety of colours arrayed like the petals of some hybrid, exotic flower.

Leading girl in green was fingering clock-wise each iridescent bloom, which in the gloom seemed to glow brighter.

Eeny, Meeny, Miney, Moe.... 

A Bahasa version that would have substituted something for the old English “Nigger's toe” in the play elsewhere.

The children watched the finger ticking round the circle like the hand of a clock. In their homes there would be few clocks, nor would their fathers wear them on their wrists. Beside the pole they had made their own. A game without beginning or end, like the eternal clock.

Omar had one minor piece of shopping needed in Jakarta. In retirement, Omar had trialed various small ventures, as much in order to keep active as anything else. A year or two ago he had bought a consignment of kerudongtudongthey were called on Java—female head-scarves.

Omar had not been able to move them from his small shop in Geylang Serai. What was lacking was proper display. Two or three manikins were needed, heads cut off at the shoulder. The market at Tanah Abang was the place. There would certainly be traders there in the manikins that on every side displayed the wares in the market. Hangers, rods, manikins—they had to be available somewhere within the stalls.

Direct from the airport bus we made for the building when Omar suddenly sighted it. Seven or eight storeys and literally hundreds upon hundreds of small stall-holders meant a needle in a haystack search. One person said over there; another the opposite direction. Omar's Bahasa Indonesian was not faultless. As an RI boy—Raffles Institution—English had become Omar’s most accomplished language.

         More than once hunger and weariness had brought a premature end to the searches within the halls of the Tanah Abang Textile Market. Finding the food stalls themselves had presented a task. For the first couple of days small, unappealing food courts were all that we turned up within.

         Eventually the first supplier was found. The first suggested another when Omar was unhappy with the wares on offer. Over there, left, right, behind the lifts, you can't miss it.

         The barriers between were innumerable tightly packed stalls filled with product, milling crowds added.

The first stall kept full and half-length manikins; nothing smaller. (Subsequently this proved incorrect.) In the other place there might be something. At first the other place proved a mirage, impossible to find before weariness and hunger overcame. A second accidental round at the first stall then turned up heads cut off at the shoulders, and in two sizes.

For some reason Omar was dissatisfied. The form he indicated; too elaborate seemed the suggestion.

There was some uncertain confusion at the time.

These made-up manikin heads were a light brown colour, a fair approximation of the tone the Malay women in Geylang Serai, back in Singapore, achieved after whitening soaps and creams. Eye-brows on the manikins were carefully shaped and lined, glossy-bright lip-stick applied. The Caucasian nose-jobs here were beyond the means of the class at Geylang, but that was being finicky.

Even women in their sixties and well into their seventies arrived at the coffee places in G. Serai in precisely this form. Not all, but certainly a fair proportion; certainly the fashion conscious, of which there was no shortage.

Omar wasn't buying. The price was ten or fifteen thousand rupiah per piece; little more than a Sing' dollar. Transport back in the plane would be a problem, but Omar thought he could cut each piece down if needed and re-glue back home.

The problem was the form.

Eventually the stall-holder produced from some corner blind, cadaver type pieces: a finely chiseled feminine form covered in a face-mask of marble-white, as in the TV advertisements for beauty products.

Unless the colour might be the problem, this immediately raised hopes. However, still no good for Omar.

On the second or third day of the quest the second stall was accidentally stumbled upon, run by a Chinese women who gave Omar short shrift. Two or three piece purchases were of small interest.

Finally Omar made the purchase of the half-brown manikins that had been handled a number of times previously. Three manikins would be sufficient for Omar's purposes at his shop. All attempts at bargaining were met with disdain by the seller.

The explanation came later, once the purchase was finally made and as Omar began thinking of transportation. 

Colour and slightly reduced size had indeed discounted the white manikins. The larger issue however was the human form itself; the reproduction.

The artful reproduction of the human form was disdained in Islam. Prohibited by traditional, conservative Islam.

As in the case of early Christianity, Islam prohibited idolatry in any form. Even for the greatly revered Prophet this was the case. No idol worship. 

Mohammad was a messenger; greatly esteemed of course, but a messenger. In the mosques, Omar explained, there could not be any kind of representation of the human form.

The spirit, the beyond, everlasting life, eternity; not the temporal human vessel, the envelope of skin and bone.

            One recalled the standpoint of course; and something similar in the attitude of some Christian groups. There was in youth the confusing distinctions between Orthodox and Catholic iconography.

The leap back to ultimate concerns struck unexpectedly. Modernity, contemporary arrangements in the West, had of course left all that far behind; far back in the past numbers of generations ago. A shopping expedition with Omar gave abrupt recall.

Stepping out each morning between the malls and adjoining slums here, passing directly from dirty, broken pavement, ragged stall-holders and the life of vagrants, to the draped manikins in the jewel-like shop-fronts, the shoppers who had acquired the cuts and colours and many of the postures of the figures in the windows, the argument against idolatry and its chief propositions resonated weeks ahead.



https://newworldwriting.net/pavle-radonic-land-of-brothers/








Friday, July 5, 2013

Writer's Bitch (Mar25)



Squeezed between GUESS opposite with all the candy-coloured hand-bags arranged on the shelves, plastic boxed creeper dividing the booths from Starbucks (in the Tropics mind), DJOURNAL below and piped music from two sides—lounge & techno—the ink was refusing to flow.
          Plaza Indonesia, level 3, Friday 5 July 2013 after lunch at one of the warungs in the shadow of Tanah Abang Textile Market. The squid, 5-6 veg, five bananas to take-away, 30% short of the price of an admittedly good latte at “Churreria”.



Thursday, June 27, 2013

Gila - Crazy - published by NWW



There was some comic by-play at the front desk where the young widower Irwan was the butt of the jokes. The standard of gila, crazy was tossed around. Who among us had the propensity? Who fell most prone? how? when? under what circumstances?

Mostly Irwan was fine and proper, the pleasant middle-aged woman who often partnered Irwan at reception testified. Truth be told, however, sometimes he could go a bit gila.

Possibly the fellow was prone to waywardness where perempuan, women were concerned, maybe.

This was let pass by the receptionist. Not something for her comment.

A chap behind seemed to appear from out of nowhere, thin air. From the rear access to the prayer room possibly.

Oh yes indeed. Certainly. Gila to the max our Irwan, take it from me. Flapping his arms and rolling shoulders.

The sign that followed left no room for doubt. With the fingers of both hands entwined the fellow impressed his point. Hands clasped as if in readiness for earnest prayer or beseeching, he started a rapid hammering of one palm onto the other. A kind of nut-cracker effect with the jaws in a frenzy of snapping.

SNAPSNAPSNAPSNAP

Some kind of voracious creature that had leapt from the paddy or jungle was evoked, one native to the region.

WhooWhooHoo. Big wide smiles; cackling. A little adolescent.

Poor darkly eye-bagged Irwan thirteen months widowed from his dear wife. Irwan was also one of those incessant screw-tight blinkers that one commonly found in the Tropics. A few days before he had given the name of his departed partner. In his wallet the dead woman’s ID was kept by her mourning husband. The document showed a plain-looking woman in dull orange-brown scarf on one side of the card and a larger image of her finger-print on the other.

A year now after the loss Irwan, a good Muslim, could marry.

— But not easy you know, these days…

Someone backstage needed Irwan.

The substance and depth of these superficially plain, unmade-up and scarfed women had been established over the twenty-five months in the region. Sitting at Starbucks again after the jollity at the lobby one watched the familiar fashion parade over the polished tiles, recalling Irwan’s wife and others like her. If Irwan now went a little gila where women were concerned it would only be grief involved.

The disaster had been more terrible still as the wife had perished in child-birth, the baby with her.

Irwan lived with his parents, his brother and family close-by in the compound, an hour out of central Jakarta—always depending on the traffic.

Hotel Kalisma stood a kilometre from the Bunderan, the chief roundabout in the city; perhaps two kilometres from Monas, the main square with the Soekarno-era Freedom monument. Irwan’s home was kampung, village country-side. If there were roosters and chooks behind Room 120 at Kalisma one kilometre from Plaza Indonesia and Bunderan—as there certainly were—more would be found where Irwan lived. In a car trip well within the inner circle of the city there had been a small herd of goats roadside, evidently for sale.

Irwan the young widower wanted to show the foreigner, the Bule, White something of a Javanese kampung. There was much to see in Jakarta, a “dynamic city”, according to Irwan. The city was one thing; the kampungs something entirely other, the man insisted.

It had been difficult to convince Irwan that this Bule knew kampungs; that he indeed hailed from one in Europe actually. That Europe even today was not all Champs Elysees and Westminster. Indeed goats, roosters and thatched housing was a common heritage.

A trip that promised much. Toil over the pages prevented it that afternoon after Irwin’s work-shift.


NB. Published in a longer sequence titled “Land of Brothers” by New World Writing Quarterly, Feb 2022

https://newworldwriting.net/pavle-radonic-land-of-brothers/